I rushed to post Hannah 2: Junior Cotillion Ball before a vacation last month, and I shouldn't have. It's been revised and reposted after considerable improvement.
Several readers pointed out technical problems with it. The name of Hannah's mother was inconsistent with the Hannah 1: Innocence Lost, and that was just the beginning.
I found more mistakes, from typos to missing words. And after allowing the story to ripen on the shelf a few weeks, I gave it the heavy editing it needed before reposting on Sunday.
Thus, I commend to you and new & improved Hannah 2: Junior Cotillion Ball and hope you enjoy it.
Hannah certainly enjoys it.