So going back and looking at the first draft. Ouch. Clunkier than a troupe of pantomime ghosts. Ideas are sound, execution is okay-ish, but trying to tick too many boxes in one chapter. Over cluttered.
This means some rewriting, and that's not made any easier in that my main PC is about to go back into the shop to fix some rattling failing fans.
So for those who're waiting, 6 is coming, but it's being redone on a laptop that's showing it's age and gets upset when I look at too many things at once.
Annoying.
Neen