Just submitted part 3 of this story. There will be a part 4 in conclusion. Noticed that one of the readers gave it a "1" which really meant they were trolling and marking down as part of some strange agenda on the internet. I am of course biased but I believe that while this story is erotica, it has an intricate vocabulary and nuances of character development that make it one of my better stories for this pen-name and probably most of my other pen-names as well. The writing style in this story is contemporary but it has hints of intelligent thinking on the part of the main character but it is the flaws of character that make the story not the action.