Alright Since Chapter 6 is in queue to be edited and 7 is awaiting polish, last minute additions, and editing, and chapter 8 is slowly starting to form. I'm realizing I need something more than what I have for character bios. I'm thinking of posting them as a 'story' here on SOL for everyone to see. A chapter per character to make it easy. Update them as needed and let everyone know in these blog posts. I would like to know what my fans and followers think, so feel free to message me, even if you aren't a fan or follower, message me.
I am learning more and more as I write, I'm learning to cool off the story a bit and come back to re-read what I wrote and make sure it makes sense. I hope what I learned shows in chapter 6, at time of finishing it, it was ~5500 words (pre-edit) which was around 1/3 the word count of the prologue and chapters 1 thru 5. Chapter 7 currently is at 4450 words (also pre-edit).
I know I can't please everyone. I know my story has gray areas of morality, like 2 physically 13-year-olds, but the mentality of 43-year-olds being sexually active. Then there's the fantasy of mastering the mind and having abilities like telekinesis, telepathy, even some form of fantasy DnD psionic abilities when they are older, and who knows what else feels right to put into it.
With that I end this post. Feel free to message me with compliments, critiques, or just fan mail. I will try to reply to most if not all for now. And as always. Thank you for reading this blog and my story.