After talking with my better half, I've decided that I'm going to revamp the whole series. I've got some writing experience now and I know what would make a better story.
I'm going to add a couple of characters and more than likely add to Meredith's magical skill set that she learned from her mother. I would love to hear some suggestions if anyone has any ideas.
Chapter 1 is being looked at and reviewed by a proofreader and should be posted by Tuesday at the latest.
Thanks for reading our stories...