After some feed back and comment reads, I am changing a few things in CH 1 of "A New Lease On Life". First up it'll just be a prologue page. Second, with some help I've made some things more clear, edited some things, like the infamous meet and not meat mentioned a few times. And third looking to get an editor, already had some one offer to edit my work and messaged them back about it so hope it'll turn out well.