I started writing stories inspired by one I found on Aastr that inspired me to start writing.
It was fascinating because it was done entirely in dialogue. I've never seen that done well until I read this story. No action description but the reader is able to perfectly follow along.
The story begins with a father telling his teenage daughter to take her panties all the way down and prepare to be spanked. Naturally, she feels she is too old to be spanked this way but we get the impression this has happened plenty of times in the past.
There is a lot of humiliation and BDSM when the wife turns out to be a submissive. The neighbor boy comes over and says he thought he saw a woman with nipple peircings nude in the backyard.
The dad makes his wife come out and drop her robe "Now this is important, boy. Did the peircings look anything like these?"
Unfortunately, the story was never finished.
I decided rather than try to finish the story to do a series of short homages to it. Stories in the spirit of that initial tale that got me into writing.
I don't write in "dialogue" only though. I am not that good of a writer. I may give it a try one day but it is more traditional storytelling. I usually do 1st person from a single perspective to give the reader something to relate to in the telling of the tale.
Every now and then I do birds eye view third person as well.
Case in point (and why I am writing this blog today) is
"Keeping the womenfolk in line -Karen's Tale"
It was originally called "Your face would look good between my legs". However, I was never happy with that title. Now that I've added some chapters I renamed it. The link is located here;
https://storiesonline.net/s/22519/your-face-would-look
It tells the story of a woman and her son visiting her sister. They have travelled across the country and have no where else to go. Her sister earns her money working out of her trailer selling ass on the Internet. She lives with her two hot daughters, young son and husband. The family is just like any other all-american family. They love each other, have squabbles etc.
I hope you will enjoy it. The feedback has been "mostly positive".
One other notes: Thanks to my friends I am often able to go back and fix my mistakes. I don't have a regular editor to help me. If you see a grammar or consistency mistake in my chapter please let me know.