Hi All
My poor old brain needed a break!
Between writing "The Fortune Of The O'Dell's" and "The Strawberry Patch Book 4 - Babies Please Don't Go" and keeping up with the reading of Micheal Loucks and Tefler, my brain hurt.
I opened my "Other Projects" file and the next thing on the list was to revise "I Know You Do". I went back through and looked at all the comments and found some common issues. I went back and did some additional writing on the story and I think I made it a better read. The ending is certainly not as rushed as I had originally made it.
If you'd like to read it again, I would appreciate any feedback.
Later,
Mick