Hi All
The most wonderful DaveT took time out of his life to edit "I'll Fall In Love Again?" after I added chapters 5 & 6. I caught a few big time goofs and pointed out some faults that I thought I had learned to correct. Oops!
I have posted all six rewritten chapters. The story didn't change, but I think the fixes may have explained the actions of the characters in a more clear manner.
Chapter 17 of "Friends and Family", also edited by DaveT will post Sunday morning. This is the last of the Diana chapters. After this the kids return home.
Again, thank you to all who made comments. I must admit that this story brought the greatest range of positive and negative remarks. I guess that means I wrote something that affected a lot of people.
I appreciate your readership
Mick