On 2020-05-16 cadsat said:
Please, please keep the original (awe fuck me) story up while you write the new version. I hate when authors delete all chapters of an original story while writing the new version. I like to compare both versions as the story progresses. Thank you for providing readers with an awesome story to enjoy.
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First thanks for reading 'cadsat' as well as all my faithful readers.
Second, No, worries I will not be deleting any of the 'Ah fuck me' chapters. They will serve to remind me of how far I have come as a writer. It seems slower than a snail's crawl. And the mistakes one can make.
I enjoy writing, but in this case it gets in the way completing more chapters. And chapter 17 of AFM is a prime example.
Some people liked it others didn't. But the most important issue was that it was more or less a rewrite of chapter 14 that I had forgotten I had said the same things.
The perils of not re-reading and taking way too long between writing chapters.
Anyways, I will keep on writing as best I can. No promises as to when the next will come. I have a few ideas, and knowing myself they will slow up other aspects of the story.
GOD, willing (chuckles as that will be the name of one of the chapters.) Maybe it will not be so long.
I have to discipline myself from not rambling so much as that I kill the flow of the story.
Thanks again for being readers.
Grey Dragon AKA Allan, to my friends.
The rest of you can call me whatever you like, as long as it is not late for dinner.