I'm a big fan of Vulgus. His writing is a huge inspiration to me. When I asked him if I could write a sequel to one of my favorite stories of his I was excited to get his blessing.
My brother's revenge was a short six chapter story. It left me wondering how Jeff and Lori dealt with each other after it ended.
I try to answer that question in my sequel. It's been slow going. My friend Mike has a project of his own and can't edit for me like he was. I'm sure I've got a few mistakes in the first three chapters of the sequel to Vulgus's story. Apologies in advance. If you notice any let me know.
I thought I would ask for feedback. I was being clever and start the story with Lori's recurring dream to immerse you into her psyche.
However, I think some readers were confused. It was intentional not to say 'this is a dream" at the start so when you see her awake it makes sense why she proceeds to confront Jeff.
Will you let me know how it reads to you?