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Too much Spanish???

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I need some help from you that were kind enough to read Falling into Routine. Spanish is scattered throughout the story because it is what is in my head. Does it take you out of the story or give more oomph to the emotions? I try to give enough context that translation isn't needed but I would like some feedback.

 

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