We could all use some good news. This pandemic is really messing with us all.
I don't have as much time to write due to the pandemic but I am continuing on with the "Keeping my sister in line" thanks to overwhelmingly positive feedback.
There were a few people who felt like downvoting the story, and sending me nasty grams but for the most part it was positive. I even had one guy say that I messed up by adding a black guy to the story.
I hadn't added a black guy to the story but just because he said that I am definitely adding SEVERAL black guys to the story - with really big dicks and they are going to fuck the ever loving shit out of some pretty white girls.
I was recently made aware that I have some kind of "formula" to my stories.
https://twitter.com/CurvyBandida/status/1256000490619297792?s=09
I believe this is a mother and a daughter who do porn together sometimes on Twitter - love the picture. They lead a crazy lifestyle. I tend to write about people like them meeting people like me (who are boring).
All of my stories tend to follow a "formula" of some kind on the surface. There are some standard characters - the awkward teenager, the bitch, the well trained slave, the nice guy, etc - they don't all have the same face/facets but you'll see them in all my stories usually.
They also tend to have a "Disruptive event" - discovery of peeping, blackmail, a new policy with the landlord, family visit, vacation. The event can be positive, negative, neutral depends on your perspective. I began with some sort of bang that is going to change someone's boring little life.
Once I have the people and the event I start writing. I don't usually know where it's going to go but I usually start taking them on some journey - where at least one character transforms during the story from what you thought they were into something else. I tend to zig and zag around in the story so that the reader doesn't always predict where it is going to go.
In Keeping my Sister in Line - I establish the basic protocols around the house for discipline. I spend a little time letting the characters stumble and learn from mistakes. I've got them heading out of the house to the mall to learn how to act in public.
The problem I have is often with endings. I typically fall in love with the characters and don't want to end the relationship. I might also fall out of love with the characters and want to move on.
Like a pilot - the landing is the most important part of the whole operation. It's not that hard to take off, its easy to keep it up in the air - but landing is the one where if you fuck it off you don't get many people that want to ride with you again.
That's always the challenge - is saying goodbye to the characters and leaving them on their journey.
I'd love to make every story epic 30+ chapters. The problem is I could have also written three shorter stories in that time that may have been appealing as well. The challenge I will have with this one is knowing when and how to end it because I really feel like there is so much potential with these characters to watch them develop.
Its a good problem to have.