It looks like I will be redoing chapter 14 and those following, 16 and 17 looked like they were just rewrites of 14
Crap serves me right for taking so long between chapters.
There is some good stuff in 14 and 16, so I will be combining them, making one more significant chapter. I will have to renumber the other sections.
This rewrite looks like I will be doing some major work here, and renaming the story and then reposting it with its new name.
Please bear with me.
GD