Old rotorhead has edited chapters 18,19,20 and 21. Generally my bad punctuation, but he has also made some excellent suggestions and pointed out some historical inaccuracies. I think we have a much improved and readable stroy.
I had also made a silly error in naming Lord Kingswood's daughter Lady Kingswood. That would, of course, be his wife. So when you see her in future she will be Lady Beatrice Hatherley.