Normally, I wait until chapter seven to turn on voting. I assume that gives people enough time to know if the story held their interest and they can form an opinion on what they would like to vote for the story.
However, I felt chapter five is really hot and exciting. It adds a twist to the story that I hope most did not see coming.
I have received some positive feedback on this story. I do have to say that I owe a lot of this to Mike McGifford who has tirelessly edited this thing in the background. I can't keep posting a chapter a day without wearing him out - lol.
I do have several chapters in the process of edit now. However, I wanted to ask you how long you want the story to go?
Do you see this as a short teaser for a bigger/more fun story?
Do you want it to be a medium one/typical of my stories?
Do you want this to be an epic like HOA or Do you have a big dick? why not?
Every story can't be an epic - and while I am writing this I can't go back to other stories and finish them/start new ones. If this is something you enjoy though I have a lot of ideas for the future with where this is going.
Do the characters ring true?
I realize many are similar to past characters I've written but they also have some unique differences. I enjoy playing with mischeivous bitches who deserve some justice/karma.
I also like to include women who know what they are and what they want and enjoy submission like Gloria(cherry) the mom.
As an author, I enjoy the evolution of characters. If they start out awesome/confident/knowing everything they have no where to go but down. I am loving Teddy's timid exloration of his new world.
If you haven't checked it out yet, but are a fan of my stories - please let me know what you think.