Last week I posted the first chapter of The Dream - Book 2. I had hoped for a little feedback and what I got was Eddie Davidson to the rescue.
He contacted me and said he liked the new chapter but... well Eddie's 'but' started a complete overhaul of the chapter and in fact doubled its size along with making something better than I could possibly have created alone.
I hope to have the replacement chapter uploaded tomorrow morning and I really hope that those of you who like the work of Eddie Davidson will see his hand in everything that changed... including the subtle recap so that this chapter could potentially be read as a stand-alone story for those who simply don't care how things got to where they are in book 2 chapter 1.
Now I'm not sure if the story I upload tomorrow should be listed as a stroke story or not - there's not a lot of blatant rumpy-pumpy but it certainly pushed my buttons and I halfway wrote it! It DOES include a heck of a lot of content that Eddie and I talked about, yet stuff that never made my personal cut in version 1. Stuff I left on the editing room floor and Eddie carefully picked back up, repackaged and made what it was always SUPPOSED to be. So I'll mark it as a stroke story hoping I'm not letting too many readers down. Character motivation is very erotic to me and there's a TON more of it in the new version.
I really hope I get feedback from anyone who bothered to read the first version, so I can ascertain if those people think the new version is as good as I personally believe it to be.
Comments will be enabled but voting won't be for now - haters usually give anything I write a score of 1, about two minutes after it posts, which simply tells me they couldn't have possibly read it and doesn't help me improve at all.