Hi All
In an effort to redeem myself from my previous uneducated and unedited writing efforts, I've been spending considerable spare time going back over past efforts and correcting them, using the lessons I have received from Askepot and DaveT.
The latest efforts are reposts of "Equilibrium" and "A Plan Comes Together". Please feel free to read them again, if you already have, or for the first time. Let me know if you can spot errors. And if they are worth a better score, I would appreciate it. Well, my poor writer's ego would. I'm fine!
Thanks again for everyone's readership. I so appreciate it.
Mick