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Minor edits in Generous Offers 2 – the Cruise

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Just reposted 5 of my 11 chapters. In one place one word was added and in two places a single word was deleted. In one place a missing semicolon changed the meaning of the sentence. I only noticed because CoullPert told me about it. I was also informed about two to's that should have been too's. I had already found one place without quote marks where my MC was speaking. I went through the entire story and fixed a few other missing quote marks.

 

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