I messed up the first postings, not only mistakes, but a serious chapter error, which was supposed to be posted as chapter 4, chapter 4.5 and then chapter 5, came out all wrong and 4.5 was omitted by the site altogether. I finished the story and posted it now as a re-post and instead of copy/paste text, send in the file as a docx text file and complete. Hope it will show up here in the list soon. Hope you like the finished and corrected story. Let me know.