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The Swedish Holiday Trip blog 2

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I messed up the first postings, not only mistakes, but a serious chapter error, which was supposed to be posted as chapter 4, chapter 4.5 and then chapter 5, came out all wrong and 4.5 was omitted by the site altogether. I finished the story and posted it now as a re-post and instead of copy/paste text, send in the file as a docx text file and complete. Hope it will show up here in the list soon. Hope you like the finished and corrected story. Let me know.

Swedish holiday trip

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Hello folks, I see something has gone wrong with posting the first batch which I posted as plain text, allot of the layout was simplified and beside that, I still found a ton of errors in the text, verb tenses an sentence structures. I will repost the whole story, and complete, because the rest of it is finished as well. Previously I had send it in as copy/ paste text. Now I will try to send it in as a file, more chance maintaining the original layout. Quite a challenge doing this from a tablet. Greetings.

fantastic

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My latest story is on line, I posted the whole story in just 3 days but I started writing it about 7 months ago.

I hope I have improved my writing skills a bit. Sure it is specific about golden showers so it is not everyone's cup of tea maybe.

I slowly learned to take my time, write something, let it sit, read it again, wait several weeks and check again and again and then wait 3 months or even longer to finish it and proofread again.

And every time I read it over I see mistakes, in grammar but the most difficult part is to get the verbs in the right time, past tense or present tense or...

I started writing because I want to write a book about myself and also a thriller. The best way to do that I was told is to start writing erotic stories first. Usually because the plot is not so difficult to make up. You stick with your own experiences as the core and than make up the conditions around it. So all my erotic stories has some part in it, that I have experienced, but how much and which parts I won't say.

Once I am getting better, I will do the other things I want to write about. I have started a thriller, with minimal sexual content, but it will take more than a year to finish basically because of the research and editing.

I will also promise that the previous stories I posted here, I will review and Revise them over time and then repost.

The fantastic inn story is for a big part a true story. There is such a motel, or at least back then in the late '80s, slightly different name, but same location. I still have the complimentary glasses, with the name of the motel imprinted, in my kitchen cabinet!

Hope you enjoy the story !

hopefully improving

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a few more chapters the last few days for 'average life turned wet'
more chapters coming up.
Another new short story tomorrow.
Actually, All of the chapters for 'average life' have been written already a while ago but I keep revising them, so far revised them 3 or 4 times, just trying to sieve out the spelling/writing error, the flow of the story etc.
Criticism is very welcome, just let me know if you find serious errors in it and where and what and I will fix it and re-post.
I am quite new at this but I have learned a great deal already. I am surprising myself that when I have an idea and start writing, what flows in to my mind, a new kind of creativity (for 'average life that is') some other stories based on true experiences.
Still have a few more chapters and stories to edit and then I will start writing a new one again.
Thanks for you votes!

Me the new Author

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So, my first ever blog, bear with me.

I have been a member here and reader since about 2003 and I never would have thought to start writing something. I started writing last year and posted some stories on other websites that are not open to everyone. I am writing new stories as well.

Reviewing some of the older stories now, found a lot of errors, edited the stories and posted them here, together with the newer stories I am writing.


What I am lacking her in the erotic stories is that there are not so many stories dealing with watersports as main theme, so I thought to change that.


Hope you like the stories and have some suggestions how to improve my writing, some criticism what I did wrong and should change or edit will be appreciated also.

greetings.
p.s. voting is also a good way of showing if you liked my stories of course.

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