My first newsboy story, The Girl in the Window, is based on one of my favorite fantasies, which, in turn, arose from an incident in my adolescence. It's been on my mind awhile now, and I've decided on a rewrite that removes the overwritten passages and changes the outcome in a small but signifcant way. I like it better now, and I hope my friends and fans here will give it another read.
Happy Hump Day. Take that any way you want.