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1: Beth Naked in School by peregrinf
Beth Finch convinces her parents to sign her up for the Naked in School Program, and to her surprise, she's chosen almost at once. It's great fun to watch her sort through her conflicted feelings about public nudity and sex. In a touching and funny scene, she gives up her virginity to her beloved Carl, but she stops him before he can say he loves her. The Program is making her hornier than she can handle, and she's convinced she's on the verge of doing something monumentally slutty. If he still loves her after that, she tells him, then he can go ahead and say it. It's a great set up for an act of school spirit that makes Beth a living legend. Peregrinf is a professional who wrote some classic titles in the golden age of paperback porn, and his experience is on full display here. The writing is conversational and vivid, and there's even a real plot. I love Beth.
2: Carl Naked in School - Beth's Story by peregrinf
Karen Wagner invented the Naked in School Universe, but to my mind, peregrinf perfected it. So far, he has written four nearly novel-length stories on "the program" and is working on a fifth. All deal with the same constellation of young characters, and my affection for them has only deepened as the series has gone on. It's hard to pick one jewel amid the riches, but I have to go with this one and "Beth: Naked in School."( So that's two jewels.) Beth is my favorite of peregrinf's narrators — a smart, shy girl who, through the program's influence, gradually emerges from her shell as an oversexed exhibitionist. In this instance, peregrinf completely retells his first NIS tale, "Carl: Naked in School," day by day, almost minute by minute, but from Beth's point of view. That he would attempt anything so risky says a lot about him as an author. That he pulls it off so successfully says even more. The Great Dress Hunt is a classic set piece I've returned to again and again.
3: Daddy, Can I Talk to You? by Chandra
One of Chandra's finest stories, and one of her least typical. There's an undercurrent of anger to much of Chandra's writing, but this is essentially a comedy, and as good-natured as incest can be: A young girl's boyfriend is pressuring her to have sex, and she runs to her father for advice and practical demonstrations. As the boy's demands escalate, so does the girl's need for her father's instruction. The ending is perfect. I was so taken with this story that I used the plot for my own horny fairy tale, "The Nervous Princess" (http://storiesonline.net/sex-story/68235).
4: Dee Does Middle School by peregrinf
After a long gestation, peregrinf's latest installment in the saga of the Walkers and the Finches is finally complete, and it was a joy to follow its progress. Dee was the breakout character in pererinf's Carl and Beth NIS stories, and here she narrates her own spinoff. In the saga's previous story, "Carl and Beth Do Sex Ed in Middle School," Dee, an eighth-grader, emerged as the star of a sex-ed crash course given for her and eleven of her classmates, who dub themselves The Dirty Dozen. Now, during the following week, she's dealing with the fallout: kids are pairing off, a friendship seems to be ending, and a damaged young boy is coping with a mysterious problem at home. And to top it off, Dee finds herself falling for another member of her swim team. If it's not quite the masterpiece "Beth" is, it's an absorbing tale nonetheless, and there's plenty of hot adolescent sex going on.
5: Taylor's Growing Up by Lauren
Lauren is the master of the slow tease. In "Taylor's Growing Up," she establishes a flirtation between Taylor, a horny, mature-looking 12-year-old girl, and Jack, her brother's best friend, who is 17, and she takes her time turning up the heat. The story is up to Chapter 13 now, with more to come, and the relationship still hasn't been consummated, but while we're waiting, we're treated to every other sexual situation imaginable — manual, oral, even sexting. Jack's girlfriend and Taylor's brother begin to get suspicious. Taylor's mother also notices she's growing up and decides to teach her a thing or two about self-pleasuring. As things get hotter, they get more complicated with the inevitability of farce. This is not just a good sex story; it's a good story, period.
 

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