Sorry for the delay (nothing new!).
Chapters 1-3 and the Prologue are in the process of being reposted with major additions. All of them should be available withing the next few hours - some already are.
Nothing has changed as far as the plot is concerned. The additions focus solely on "filling in" the things that would've occurred during this time period (first six months of the story) if they had been written properly. This is no fault to KK (or even myself) as neither of us were planning to include all the characters that ended up in the story.
All of the remaining chapters have been edited to one degree or another. Most of it is just fixing grammatical errors. However, some involve changes that were needed because of characters being introduced in the revised chapters 1-3 instead of much later in the story (e.g. Mrs Thomas). Nick and I are in the process of finalizing all those edits and I'll be posting them as we do, beginning with chapter 4 and so on. So new readers may run across some awkward moments in the interim.
I hope everyone has a wonderful holiday season!
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