I am working on a short story side project.
I contacted Vulgus and he gave me his blessing to continue his story.
If you haven't read it - it leaves off with a lot of questions for me. I try to answer them in the follow up story.
https://storiesonline.net/s/21288:219327/chapter-1-vulgus-my-brothers-revenge-ii
I start this chapter with a dream. I wanted to grab the reader's attention and speak to the constant subtext in Vulgus's original story that as Lori engaged in her brother's sordid games, she got turned on. She still hasn't dealt with what happened.
It gets a little over the top in the dream (by intention) and then tells the reader clearly -this was a recurring dream. It sets the tone for Lori to approach Jeff about what happened.
I have one chapter. I could have also written that Jeff eventually thinks of a much better way to blackmail his sister and picked it up there.
I'd really like to hear what you think happens next/or where you'd go if you were going to continue Vulgus's story.