The final two chapters of the Goldbergs are pretty intense. I hope you enjoy them. I could have written a few more chapters about Beverly and Erica as slut puppies but I think the arc has concluded.
I'll be posting Chapter 11 after I finish some final edits. I hope you have followed along with it. I'd love to see other stories with a similar premise.
It is basically a story about a dare. The dare is to pretend you are under mind-control and see how far you can go with a straight face.
I could easily picture it being much like a game of truth or dare.
I am still not ready to immerse myself into the sequel of HOA. I am gathering my thoughts and making notes though. I started to write it in the voice of Froggy (the younger sister) but I wasn't entirely happy with that. I thought it may give the story a different perspective but it didn't feel quite right.
I've got a few half-started single chapter stories I started as well that I've been futzing with. Stay tuned though and I'll share with you my next plans.
In the mean time, may I plug my friend Mike McGifford's story?
"The Dream" covers the time when Mike and Karen are first starting their BDSM journey and dealing with their own vanilla family. These are the neighbors that live in Sunny Manor in the HOA story.
Mike is on Chapter Five and I hope you will give it a read. I think you will enjoy it if you liked HOA. There is a realness about these characters that give them a lot of flavor and nuance.
https://storiesonline.net/s/20945/the-dream-by-mike