Rather than write a sequel I found myself drawn into writing a prequel to my first story. I'll be the first to admit it doesn't have the erotic charge, but given the plot I hope that is justified. It's almost done now, though I'm a bit behind getting chapters uploaded. I'd love to hear some feedback, whether that is about plot, style, eroticism or simply did or didn't like it and why.
I'm still planning to write my sequel, but I'd like to improve my craft a bit, especially now I've ventured into dialog occasionally.