Well it's taken long enough but I've submitted another chapter of "The Dream". This chapter is different... I wrote it, had it ripped to shreds and put back together by my friend Eddie Davidson then after another set of tweaks, was blown away when another OUTSTANDING author agreed to rectify my 9th grade English abomination.
For example, I was totally unaware that I can use the word "that" a half-dozen times in a single paragraph!
I was hoping my new friend would agree to allow me to rave about her but such is life. I simply could not allow her efforts or Eddie's, to be allowed to fly under the radar because I am so grateful to them both.
I hope their efforts are positively recognized in the score as the story continues but remember, it's still about bondage and submission - a genre to be avoided if you're not interested in seeing lives changed in that way.