I've reached chapter eight and I am turning on voting.
There are 5 additional completed chapters I am still editing.
If this story interests you/intrigues you after chapter 8 then please vote for it and I'll continue it to the completion.
As you may/may not know I completely re-booted the story with an all new chapter one not too long ago. I felt it set the right tone for the story as a prologue. It also added some much needed "Uber Driving Sluttery"
This story has been a real joy to write.
I was inspired by women on Twitter who do amateur porn. They seem to revel in doing the nastiest/naughtiest things they can get away with.
Hot wives who like to flash at Home Depot - spreading their ass cheeks and bending over nice and slow while they pick up a bag of fertilizer and then smile for the camera.
A sexy blue-eyed brunette who could be a traditional model snorting cum off the bathroom floor with a grin.
A woman with weights stretching out her pussy lips being dragged to her own toilet, letting her head get dunked and glub-glub-glubbing as he makes her hold her pretty face in the bowl. She blows bubbles and laughs on the third try. Afterwards, she shoots cum out of her asshole across the bathroom and crawls over and licks it from her tile floor like she is hangry.
Examples? Look up "Uber Driving Slut" @uberslutmother on Twitter. She drives Uber and gives guys rides. Sweet Buttocks, search on @flashywife and see that hot MILF revel in spreading her cute asscheeks.
These were inspirations to this story. Obviously, it is not based on their lives though.
@shaidenrogue looks like every stuck up high school cheerleader you knew in high school. She does every debased, depraved naughty thing the Hotmoms do with a smirk on her face.
I like those much more than I do any slick produced fake stuff. They live this every day. I love to see the delight in their eyes as they do some depraved, naughty thing and hold it for the camera. It seems like because their feed has 200 other sluts doing even more nasty things they feel the need to top them.
They once had a 'running butthole challenge' on Twitter. Girls filmed themselves running, jumping in the air, spreading their cheeks to show their butthole over the camera. They found all sorts of clever ways to do it - some even landing on a dildo and impaling their cute little pussies.
Writing Hot Moms was like channeling those thoughts into a story format.
I began with the intent of writing just four chapters. I wanted to see if I could do third person omniscient storytelling. It isn't my normal mode of story telling. I like to get into a character's head and tell it from their POV. The main value though was that I didn't need a lot of exposition. I could show the reader what was really going on.
I really had to stop myself at Chapter 13. I feel the story reached a natural conclusion. If there is more interest after that then I'm inclined to tell more of that story.