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Update for 10/9 - Talking about The walk of Life.

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After talking with a fan of the story, I've uploaded chapter 5. The fan's concern was that The walk of life was an SWMS story. That it was very much a story with a lot of sex, and that I'd change that tag.

I assured the fan that The Walk of Life will NOT be that kind of story. It may mention sex, it may even hint at it. But there will be NO graphic sex. And by No, i mean I won't be spending chapters or parts of chapters with 1 or more characters pleasuring themselves or each other.

The main character, Joshua, isn't about that at all. What makes me say this? 1996, chapter 1 clearly has joshua dropping his then girlfriend because of just that.

"No, I have no real feelings for Heidy. When I dated her, it was just for the chance of getting in her panties. I realized that's not a good reason, not to mention, we never went out on dates. We were going steady without learning a thing about each other. The most we would do together is make out and occasionally she'd let me do some light groping. We didn't even hang out. There's gotta be more substance than that to a relationship." I pointed out.

In otherwords, Joshua is trying the old school method of dating. You know... the ones that actually include dates. Maybe a kiss at most? The ones where you don't bang the person until you're well into the relationship? I realize that it wasn't always like that. Hell, people smash now more often then they care to date.

Reason is, back when I was in junior high, which is what this story was initially based off of, We didn't go out on dates. A relationship just started and you were in a locked relationship. you couldn't go out with others, you couldn't see other people. You had to be on the phones saying "i love you." and if you didn't say it for the first week and then said it, it was like dropping a bomb, it could make or break the relationship, and that's not the thing Joshua is after.

Frankly, and I gotta state this, I've been trying to write this kind of story for a while. The kind of story that really captures what I remember about my younger days. I don't have a good memory of it, so I'm making things up as I go along. Back in 1996, when I was in Jr. High, I wasn't at the point where I was fucking anyone. Was I a horney little shit? Yes. Would've I fucked my girlfriend? Sure. Did I see the signals when she was ready for me to be her first? NOPE.

This story... it's what I would want my second chance to be. I wouldn't go back in time and just fuck my way thru life, because I'm not like that now. Hell, my wife can attest to that. There's quite a bit of myself in this story. Do I train, like the main character says he does? Yep, every day I practice a few moves. Do I remember all this shit without looking it up? Yeah, pretty much.

I mean honestly, sit back and think, if you like or hate the story so far, if you died, and was given the chance to go back, what would you do? How would you change the lives around you. For me, this is that story.

Thanks for reading, chapter 5 will be up as soon as it processes. I'm working on chapter 6 now.

 

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