I started writing Hot Mom: Uber Driving Slut as a writing exercise.
My plan was simple: Write about a hot slut who drives Uber and gives guys hand jobs and sucks their cocks. I've seen women who do this, it trends on Twitter as #dirtyuber, sometimes it just means they'll drive to your house if you are local and suck you off.
It's a lot safer than walking the streets and you can pick and choose the guy in your OWN car and not his.
I wanted to give the main character (Melanie) a reason to do this other than she just thought it was a thrill. I didn't want my normal multi-chapter character build so I started with her in the midst of rough-sex and then using some flashbacks within that framework I tried to give the reasons she was the way she was.
The initial feedback was dismal to say the least.
However, I am glad I continued. I would tell myself "Okay, this is going to wrap up in 4 chapters", then I'd get to chapter 4 and say "There is more story to tell - let me do 5 chapters", now I have about 8 chapters almost ready to post and I still want to do a little more. The girls in this story are those gag-girls you see on sites like EvilAngel that want to throat as much cock and will snort jizz off a mirror just to post it on instagram for a laugh.
They seem to delight in any humiliating activity instead of being reluctant and semi-unwilling victims.I wanted to make them less 1 dimensional then sex-bags acting as life support for three holes and two boobs though.
I sometimes want reluctant and semi-unwilling victims in my stories. I especially enjoy the ones when one of them transitions from reluctant to finding some joy in their bimbofication. In this case, the story drips with that sentiment.
I cant' tell a story like that in 4 chapters. The later chapters are even hotter than the most one. I've been thinking about a BDSM wedding and I've never seen one of those done well in a story before. You know where the Groom walks the bride down the aisle on a leash and then they all buttfuck the bride for old-time sake at the reception? Something like that but with bitter ex-husbands who gnash their teeth while they see their ex-wife remarry and be happy for the first time surrendering all their dignity and authority to their new master?
I realized two things today though:
I can't keep writing the story unless I address those issues first:
1. I had edited this very fucking poorly. Despite using Word, Grammarly and the services of my good friend and fellow author Mike McGifford I had really screwed the pooch on this one (and not in a good way). The story was riddled with a mess of errors. There was a word "JAroosh" or something that I completely missed.
So I went back and sat down and read every chapter and painstakingly began to polish the turd. That's why I am calling it "HD" as in High Definition. I added more descriptions and details when I felt it was lacking and I corrected as many JaRoosh's I could find.
As a side note: I think now that I've decided a Jaroosh is that thin layer of skin between a woman's clit and the little cock head that looks like a penis head.
2. For a story titled "Uber Driving Slut" there was really not a lot of actual sex in a car with an Uber passenger. I've remedied that by adding a prologue to boost the Uber Sex by at least 100%. I also feel that it foreshadows the relationship between Melanie and Savannah.
This story is a true joy to write. My main regret is lacking the time and singular focus to write only this as I am also deeply in love with the HOA story and carefully editing it. I've also got this fantastic Slut Summer School story to finish and we've just gotten to the part where things are coming to a metaphorical head.
I ask that if you are a fan of any of my stories then you give it a read. If you see any standout grammatical errors (and I am not talking esoteric oxford comma stuff), I am talking full on "Hey, you forgot a word in this sentence" stuff that I found in the first version.
I try to write BDSM/Humiliation/sex stories with the twist of adding a little humor/real life/and make you think type stuff. I don't know if I pull that off but I do know that they make me horny.
If you've given it a read already and wouldn't mind one more go through that would be really peachy! Especially with the prologue added to the mix.
I've spent the better part of today trying to clean up my mess and add what I think is a delightful first chapter.
https://storiesonline.net/s/20972/the-hot-mom