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Ever wrote a chapter so good you didn't think you wrote it?

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I started on this site writing stories because there weren't enough stories like the ones I liked to read. I was hoping to inspire people and contribute to the community by offering some dirty stories of my own that people may like.

I've got to say some of my earliest work is pretty much garbage. I go back and look at my first Game of Thrones Story and my Fall From Heaven story and see how poor the story structure is and the grammar and I shiver a bit.

Almost no one bothered to read them. The premise was pretty bad. The first one was Sansa Stark in King's Landing being teased by Geoffery. The second was a Dark Elven Princess who is captured by Orcs and taught to be a slave in their underground caverns.

The next batch were mid-range stories. I like the story structure and the dialogue but I had no editor or feedback. I've always thought the TV show Reba was great for fan fiction. She is sort of redneckish and has a house full of girls and a hot MILF neighbor.
The story failed to gain any interest. Even now, when I see that it has 14 reads in story stats in a month I say "Wow, I am shocked!"

I wrote a couple "Naked in the Trailer Park" stories that are kind of precursors to Sunny Manor in a way. The rules of the park changed with new ownership but it wasn't supposed to be kink-friendly. The people that lived there were already there when the rules changed and the rules only changed for select people who failed to pay rent. I guess in that sense it is nothing like Sunny Manor (my current story). It was an homage to some stories I can't find on here any longer for whatever reason the author decided to pull them and I will respect that.

It was about that time I met another author who has been such a big help. I'd like to thank Mike McGifford for all his inspiration and help editing. I think without that I'd have given up.

I started to write bigger and better stories. The "Do you have a big dick, why not?" story was hot to me. A high school kid meets a shy girl at school but learns that she and her mom and sister do webcam shows at night. That was an exciting story but it needed an ending.

I carried it on a bit further from the main character's moms POV (no spoilers but there is a reason) and felt I had told her story as well.

I started to write about a situation that happened to me one Summer but I began to make it a little more like what I wished had happened. I called it Naked on Summer Vacation. The first in that series involved a strong willed Aunt who wasn't going to let me be a bratty, smart-mouthed, stick in the mud.
The second was Slut Summer School when her daughter and friends wrecked the house throwing a party and she wasn't going to let them continue being total bitches. I still haven't finished that story and intend to go back. I've got the next chapter in a rough draft format.

That being said I began to really crave two stories on here that have sat for a long time. They have amazing starts and no ending. Pinch Week and Homeowner's Association. I think this story I am doing now may be a fusion of both.

I just submitted Chapter 13. I have to say that as I re-read it before I posted it I didn't recognize my work. It was as if someone else wrote this. It was such a good chapter.

In retrospect (it would be a LOT of work to renumber everything) I would make Chapter 13 the FIRST chapter in the story and then say "Now let's rewind to two weeks ago back in Atlanta" because it really grabbed me.

Honestly, I would love to write nothing but chapters about what happened here. There was no gang bang, no ultimate torture chamber, nothing happens super intense. Yet, the dialogue and the power exchange between the characters really turned me on.

I usually write flawed characters who are liars, manipulators, bitches, cunts because when they get punished it feels a lot better to me. Some guys can enjoy a slut who really gets off on it too and I write those too.

What I do not usually write is a loving, submissive who surrenders herself not because it is a sacrifice but because she feels it is where she belongs and is thankful to do so.

It was refreshing to put her in the middle of this story.

If you havent' read HOA this is not a shameless plug. If you don't like bondage/humiliation and the themes I write about in my story codes you won't like this story no matter what.

However if you do like those themes and you haven't read HOA I'd ask you read chapter 13 first and then decide what you want to do.

 

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