I've posted chapter four of Homeowner's Association A Big Deal at Sunny Manor (BDSM). This story follows a BDSM couple when they move into a kink-friendly/clothing optional community in Florida.
I have chapter five and six in the edit process right now. ETA is one a day for them.
The first few chapters set the tone for the story. The story starts to show some of the rules in practice. Every location they visit on the tour is named for a reason.
I wanted Sunny Manor to feel like a tour through Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory only fetish-inspired. Inside the steam-inspired are wonderous surprises to the young man telling the story of things he has never seen or only seen in pictures.
Minerva's Market, DeSade's Pantry, Chez Pichard, all of these places I wanted to feel real to you and seem memorable. I wanted you to smell the smells and feel like this place could exist. There are real clothing optional kink friendly resorts. Caliente is a good example.They like Sunny Manor have legitimate rules and membership agreements that protect them and visitors. It isn't a free-for-all fuck fest.
That being said I wanted Sunny Manor to be more than just Caliente and so I placed it in a remote section of Florida between Land O Lakes and New Port Richey. They have their own garbage, sewage, etc out there so they can avoid dealing with the county, etc.
They keep to themselves, haven't had serious crime in years. Everyone that lives there is affluent and there is a security gate around the permiter that looks like a medieval fortress. It is like that in most nudist resorts. People don't lock their doors because they don't have any place to keep the keys (well they make fobs now but not everyone wears one) and it works just fine.
I've turned on voting because I think at chapter 4 I am ready for that constructive feedback as to whether this is an homage to Mister Archie's "Homeowner's Association" or it is not. I'd like you to give it to chapter six before you expect the real story to emerge though.