Hi All
Out of the blue a new friend began sending me corrections and ideas to make my very first story better. I just posted the update of "Vicki, Mick and Amy".
The one thing I chose not to change was the writing style. I still think it has way too many short sentences, but that was my initial style and I thought that it was better to keep it. Sort of a milestone to where it all began.
Have a great day!
Mick