Hi All
When I got the edited chapter back from Askepot we both thought that the start of the chapter was awkward.
I posted the edited chapter and then this morning I really stopped to read through the thing slowly and go through it a sentence at a time.
I think I got it fixed. So if you read the chapter before noon on Sunday you read the awkward chapter. I strongly suggest that you go back a reread the chapter. I think it will make more sense.
And to those you you that hat dangling ending, I'm sorry if the end of this chapter triggered you.
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Mick