I have a request. These two stories are not "Femdom" and they've been sitting dead on the site for a long time. They are a great read but unfinished masterpieces.
They need some TLC/a reboot or just a proper ending from someone willing to volunteer.
HOA: Written by Mister Archie
The story begins with a BDSM couple (With kids) moving into a BDSM friendly community. The story is written from the wives perspective and starts by laying out some of the ground rules. There are a lot of loose ends like the daughter coming of age and dealing with the rules for walking around in public that never got addressed.
I was desperate to find out what happens NEXT!!!
I don't know whether to do is a complete reboot or pick up where it left off. I'd rather someone else try.
This story just ends in the middle. I think a complete reboot would be awesome. Especially if they get the dynamics of a BDSM relationship right.
The implication is that the parents were discretely BDSM/kinky because they own a "Spanking Chair" which the boy uses on his sister at times. The parents have times where they regret their decision to start the pinch week but that is part of the tension. As an example, the Dad can't stand to even see his daughter get spanked even though it is clear he was spanking the mom in the bedroom all the time. So the Dad sort of exits stage left in the story. the mom on the other hand, being a submissive sees the value in her daughter's improved attitude but doesn't feel right directly ordering her son to spank her. She enjoys vicariously observing the results though.
All these loose ends and interesting but subtle cues in the story going to waste as the story sits fallow.
Pinch Week: Written by SmackMagnet
This story is clearly an English author with the "Catcher in the Rye" style of writing whatever is in his head in a Holden Caufield kind of narrative. He is clearly a bit of a shy nerd who has lived in the shadow of his snotty older sister. She finally takes things too far one day and the parents give her a choice:
Give your brother a week of payback OR get a job immediately/no college.
She picks a week of payback. "Pinch week" is a bit of a misnomer because it's more like a "Goose week". There is no sex but it is a hot story.
The parents were kinky/BDSM lifestyle. That is inferred. The main character though doesn't realize that until the mum brings out this spanking chair that the dad built. He is like "Why do you have this?"
They never really answer. That is very hot/plausible.
Sadly, it just ends. There seems to be an evolution where Lindsey (Reminds me of a young Lindsey from the TV show "Arrested Development").
These two stories along with some by other writers inspired me to write. I think in part because they were unfinished and I wanted to write more stories "like that" in the hopes of inspiring other writers so that I could read more stories like that.
I write so I can read more stories like them so I can be inspired to write more stories like them so I can read more stories like them so I can write more stories (And on and on).
So here is my request:
Read them. If like me, you want more, write a new story as an 'homage'.
Either picking up where it left off or in a similar vein.
I am knee-deep in finishing the Naked on Summer Vacation: Slut Summer School story. If it intrigues people I'd also write what happens to the Mom when they girls graduate (if they do).
I've also been tempted to continue the "It's not cheating if you watch" from Stefan's perspective. That may be brilliant or it may be boring.
However, I have ideas for new projects as well. One that springs to mind, was to take a place like the community in HOA or a BDSM campground (There are real places like that) and then do a series of short stories that are like a documentary interview but give some insight into their lives. They tell a little story to the audience about when they first moved in, or a neighbor or something. Then connect each person in some way. Is that something anyone would like?