Chapter 13 is posted. I think I could stretch the story like Karen's cunt a little bit wider/longer.
However, I really like how I ended that chapter. Do you think I should end the story and revisit my other story ideas?
Does it have a natural conclusion feel?
There are some unanswered questions like what about Marlene and Eddie and their kids, etc but I really kind of like leaving some of that to the imagination of the reader. I think the story 'arced'.