Hi All
Well good things have happened.
The dreaded RexfordDam has offered to edit "I'll Fall In Love Again?" and I thankfully said yes. He went over it and sent me his edits, I read his and compared it to mine and now it is done.
I hope all of you who commented will re-read the story and let me know if it now is at a level, as many said, "Not my best work" and "It has fallen short of your usual level of writing".
RexfordDam has agreed to edit my other work as it comes along. Askepot is still doing The Strawberry Patch. Askepot has helped me raise the level of SP to the point that it is scoring over an 8 and I hope that my other works that are sitting at the high 5's and the middle to upper 6's will improve.
I have a story in the wings that I was going to use as my breakout on Patreon, but I've decided to keep writing for free. With these two outstanding folks editing for me, I hope that everyone enjoys my work. Keep in mind that sometimes, I just write weird shot!
Mick