Hi All
I asked for it and I got it. I went ahead and did a big rewrite and have posted them today.
I received several fairly comprehensive bits of critique and one offer to edit my stories, other than The Strawberry Patch, where Askepot has been putting up with my poor excuse for writing for the past eight months.
I've posted what I think are the needed changes. If the one volunteer does, indeed, take on editing my stand a lone stories, then I'll post the story one last time after he, or she, has perfected it.
I'm sorry for posting this POS. I really like the stories concept and now that I've cleaned it up, I see at least two or three sequels that could get my muses attention.
Happy reading all
Mick