Hi Kids!
Well I asked and you replied.
First, those who said that I should do my thing unfettered my the thoughts of my readers, thanks, but a writer writes for two. Him/her self and those who read. I mean would Shakespeare or Gordon Johnson be who they are if no one read them?
When many people tell you that you are dead, you should consider laying down. And when many commentators tell you that the story was really good until the ending, then a writer should look at the ending.
I did. I made some changes to the first three chapters and completely rewrote the end of the last chapter to better tie up the many loose ends that I left dangling. I know that even my lady readers don't like dangling loose ends!
I have submitted all four chapters to Laz to post, so they should be out there as soon as "He Who Must Be Obeyed" gets them up and running.
Thank you again for your readership and your comments.
Mick