My better half is going to take over outlining Project" Eldest Son for me. He's more knowledgable when it comes to this kind of thing. The roles and characters aren't changing in the least, just the actions through out the storyline. I changed the pen name so that he can get some credit for his input, because without it, I can tell you that Dominic's Heroes would have been VERY boring. I know a good bit about the military, but he spent 17 years living out of a 'duffle bag"
As far as the next book, Eldest Son chapter one is getting a rewrite for the ending. The proofreader use said "it was cluttered and it felt very rushed." So please be patient, it will be worth it, I promise. I'm thinking middle of the week for the first chapter pending real life doesn't slap me in the face.
Thanks for reading...