I reposted the entire series of Dominic's Heroes today. Here's why, along with another thought or 2.
First off, yes there were some mistakes in my work and I fixed the ones that I found. I also changed some verbiage around so that it might make a bit more sense and be easier to read. Chapter one, I was originally going to use code names for the characters since some spec ops teams use them. But honestly, it got really confusing even for my better half (He's retired Army). So I got all the nick-names out.
Second, the names for the terrorists that I used are all made up in my head and are generally insulting to terrorists. I refuse to list real names of terrorists just because I don't have to. I remember watching an SNL skit with DeNiro a few years back where he was playing a Homeland Security spokesperson and he had a buttload of made up names and I laughed at almost every one of them. So thats where I got the names from. Also there really is an improvised exploding goat video. Look them both up on YouTube.
In closing, thanks for sticking with me and as usual, if you like something or think something could be better, let me know. I've got thick skin and I promise that if it's constructive suggestions, I'll at very least read them.
Thanks...