I just published up chapter 24 of the Naked on Summer Vacation story "Slut Summer School"
I've written a lot more than I ever thought I would on this site. It's been a joy to write and to receive your feedback (mostly). Some people like to send nasty grams because they don't like stories with humiliation/bondage but that's okay I guess. They have to get it off their chest somehow.
I would say that this chapter is probably the hottest chapter I've ever written. There was a nice simmer and it reminded me of early experiences with sexuality (without someone's mother there watching) of my own. I felt it was very authentic but more importantly - strokeworthy.
No spoilers but introducing Kiwi has been a real valuable part of the story. What do you think about him? Any New Zealanders find his behavior/speech credible?
Some people's entire 7 part story would barely be 14 pages of text. Most of my chapters are 14+ pages by themselves so I know it can be daunting.
If you are on the fence about reading my story, I'd suggest reading chapter 24 first and then going back to the start if you like it. That's how proud I am of it.