Hi All
First, thank you to all who wrote to me and brought the error in posting up to me. It took me a bit to catch on because I was looking at the story as it was posted in my library and it wasn't until I pulled it up off the site listing that I saw that you were all correct.
I have submitted Chapter 24 again and hopefully Laz will get it posted soon. So the cliffhanger should be revealed soon.
Thank you again for your readership and for caring enough to write me with the correction. I also appreciate that no one dropped a "You Suck!" on me for the error.
Mick