I'm restarting chapter 59 of Too Much Love for the fourth time today. The original idea for the chapter was to show how proximity to Nick and his wealth was changing people's lives without Nick or any of his inner circle actually appearing in the chapter, but after three attempts, it kept falling apart without a center to hang it on.
Instead, I'm pretty sure now it will be three sections - two from the perspective of characters who are about to leave center stage for a while and all of whom are seeing their loyalties shift as a result of Nick and his actions.
I hope to get it out some time in August.