Good morning all!
I just submitted a new chapter of my latest story and I've decided that I can only post a chapter a week - real life totally screws with my desire to write all day. Having said that, I have most of the next 2 chapters drafted and I'd be grateful for any feedback with regard to the direction in which these characters are pulling the story. Will Amanda change her tune or see this through? Will Emily get hers?
Both Amanda and Emily are making my skin crawl a little and part of me wants to jump into the story and spit on them - repeatedly - and the worst part is that it's MY story! If I cant change them and I'm the author, imagine how Brian, the male lead feels? The females certainly have a hard look at themselves coming, or at least Emily does. Amanda already knows what she needs, just not how to ask for it. Then there's Ann... what to do with that, um... person...?