I originally had the brilliant and highly creative idea to name the sequel to "Naked On Summer Vacation" by the clever title "Naked on Summer Vacation 2".
They do after all follow each other sequentially and the convention makes sense.
However, after due deliberation, I realized that doesn't do the stories justice. They are vastly different stories told from two different perspectives. They can stand alone by themselves.
So as way of explanation, let me explain:
Naked on Summer Vacation: Sissy Summer School is the story set in 1984 as told by Eddie about his Aunt. He was a pervy little know-it-all visiting Florida. It involves Femdom and humiliation.
There are literally stories about eating people while they are still alive on this site and at least a dozen stories about training one's daughter as a sex slave in the top 50 at all times. However, it was the first time I received snitty hate mail on this site. I am assuming because the subject of the humiliation was me and not a girl and that is unusual. I suggested they read the summary and the codes but apparently, that is reserved for non-twits only.
The new story - which I am enjoying writing tremendously is Naked on Summer Vacation: Slut Summer School. It is written from my cousin Blair's perspective and immediately follows the events of the first story. However, you do not have to read the first one to get the second one. A good story can stand on it's own. It would provide you some context. However, why I think this is good is because when girls are the subject of the training it is a different read for most. Eddie is still present, so be prepared for that but he is not the focus.
In other updates:
It is not cheating if you watch is paused at chapter 5. Is there a Chapter 6? like the Walking Dead, we are on the season finale and you'll just have to wait to find out. I can only focus on one story at a time and do it justice.
The Game of Thrones Challenge: I've had a few people PM me their ideas. A proper ending to the show? going back to earlier times? Sure. It's all good.
If you want to set Game of Thrones in a futuristic setting where they are now the Seven Planets and there are Space Dragons or tell a story about a peasant farmer and his family eeking out an existence under constant threat of endless wars - be my guest! Just put Game of Thrones in the title and post it in the next 30 days or so if you want to be in the challenge.
What am I reading:
I love this site. I keep checking it so frequently lately. I've researched as many older stories as I can with story codes that now I am relying on new stuff. If dirty stories were liquid my cup ranneth over and I am still thirsty.
That being said I recently saw an author write some fantastic stories that were really 'cutting edge' is the best metaphor I can use. They used themes and ideas I've never considered erotic before and found ways to make me care about the fate of the characters.
I was excited to see them continue.
Then recently they wrote a story that was basically just a bunch of vignettes of dirty talk loosely connected by some plausible actions.
In other words: Nadine sucked his balls, then she sucked this, then he put this there, then this, then that, (Then a short sentence about why Nadine is even there) then two more paragraphs of dirty stuff.
The score was through the roof. I wrote the author to say that maybe it was just me, but I couldn't even follow the plot. They wrote back to tell me that they determined through experimentation that this sort of shallow sex description scores amazingly well and that the stories I had fallen in love would be discontinued post-haste and even that the site had fallen short of their expectation and they were seeking a new place to host their creative talent.
I've been sad about that. Not just because this author's talent is being wasted catering to the lowest common denominator but because of the realization that shallow sugar-cereal type porn is going to score high when my Hearty Bran Muffin reality stuff is always going to appeal to only a select few group of perverts.
I am still making the hearty bran muffin reality stuff because I can't write the equivilent of the five Kardashian reality TV shows in porn form and wouldn't want too if I could. It is a shallow vapid world but people like what they like. If descriptions of horny sex without much characterization gets them off then who am I to judge that?
An erotic story to me has to make me give a shit about why the person is there and what they are doing. They don't have to learn a lesson or be a better person at the end. I just don't care that Nadine drained his balls unless I know a little about Nadine and the balls she is draining to want to read about it. I am probably not explaining that correctly but get me to fall in love or identify with a character and I'll fall in love with the story.
Sadly though, I am stuck without a new series to read.
But there is GOOD NEWS. There is an author on this site (and I won't say much more about them then that) that is writing a story so cool and exciting that I've found it difficult to think about anything else since I had a sliver of the insight. It is a continuation/reboot of sorts of an older story that fizzled. That will give me closure on those characters but it will also take them in a direction they should have always gone. I don't know the title and even if I did I am not sure I am at liberty to say yet since it's still being developed but damn - it is what I am excited about.
is this site perfect? No. But I love it. The admin is super responsive. The interface is clean. I hope the new author finds a site to their liking but honestly I wish they would stay and find an audience.