Thanks everyone for the feedback and taking the time to read The War of 2020 Ch 4 Committed.
I am hearing FB to go a bit darker with the abuse of the female character. I personally am trying to walk the line between love, lust and abuse because im not a huge fan of a completely powerless/ physically beat up victim.
FB for humiliation or watersports are a bit of a non-starter for me as well.
I will be writing more backstory on the War itself and the reasoning behind its continuance.
I will also consider more physical abuse. *But not at a snuff level*
Please continue to provide FB of your opinion. I am working it all into my next few chapters.
~TY ❤