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๐Ÿ’–Chapter 9 Progeny Feedback๐Ÿ’–

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Thank you all for your patience. I just put up a revised copy *looks like i put up a rough original* of Ch 9 and hope its okay and that you enjoy. Please give me any feedback or opinions for Ch. 10 that you may have.

~TY

Feedback as I finish Ch 9๐Ÿ’–

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Hola! ๐Ÿ’‹

I am currently writing Ch 9 of The War of 2020.

Feel free to let me know if you have any ideas about how you would like the story to proceed.

I appreciate all input and feedback no matter how small, it helps me write the story and build the world.

~TY ๐Ÿ’–

๐Ÿ’–Update and Feedback ๐Ÿ’–

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First, Thank you everyone for the amazing encouragement to keep writing The War of 2020. Im not a professional writer and dont really do this other than for fun so your encouragement motivates me to keep going. ;)

I made some small adjustments to CH 8 near the end that will matter in CH 9. Since I am my own editor and proof reader I am slowly going over all the chapters and fixing grammar/spelling/flow issues.

If you want to provide any feedback for CH 9 feel free to message me, I take it all into consideration and would love to hear your opinion.

Thank you for reading ๐Ÿ’‹

Feedback as I finish Ch 8 ๐Ÿ’–

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Hello ya'll,

I am about halfway done with Ch 8 in The War of 2020 but Im having a hard time finishing it out with all the possible ways the story can go.

So Im looking for any and all feedback. Feel free to message me with what YOU would like to see next so I can get a feel for what my readers want. I should be done with the new Chapter within the next week or so.

๐Ÿ’– ~TY

The War of 2020

Ch 7 Fearless Feedback๐Ÿ’–

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https://storiesonline.net/s/19908:214634/chapter-7-the-war-of-2020

I would love to get your opinion on this particular chapter and how you would like to see the story move forward. There are new character's and some turns that are now set in stone.

I am currently working on Ch 8 and have some fun plot points to decide, so let me know what you think.

As always thanks so much for reading.

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