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I have been seeing some positive votes coming in and would love to get your opinion on this particular chapter and how you would like to see the story move forward.
I am currently working on Ch 7 and have some big plot points to decide, so let me know what you think.
As always thanks so much for reading.
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Ch 5 ~Delivered~ The War of 2020 is now available!
Please feel free to send me your opinion, by anon or user feedback/ comments/ votes, regarding Ch 5 or the story as a whole.
I take all feedback into considetation as I write each Chapter.
Because I am not a writer by profession its very helpful to have your comments to guide me.
~TY ❤
Thanks everyone for the feedback and taking the time to read The War of 2020 Ch 4 Committed.
I am hearing FB to go a bit darker with the abuse of the female character. I personally am trying to walk the line between love, lust and abuse because im not a huge fan of a completely powerless/ physically beat up victim.
FB for humiliation or watersports are a bit of a non-starter for me as well.
I will be writing more backstory on the War itself and the reasoning behind its continuance.
I will also consider more physical abuse. *But not at a snuff level*
Please continue to provide FB of your opinion. I am working it all into my next few chapters.
~TY ❤
TY for your patience (looking at you webmaster), Ch 4 is available, I am looking for feedback about the direction of the story and/or how you would like the story to progress. This is an erotica so please keep that in mind.
TY for reading <3
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